This was really hard to write, I don't know if the title is appropriate for the story, but I couldn't think of anything else. Argh, I hope my writer's block ends soon. Its so hard to write things. It takes longer and longer each time to finish a story.

Anyway, this is for my favorite group,

Monthly prompt used:

Remorse and An Apology

Can be found here:

YouAsTheNarrator Literature Prompt Feature 7-04-10Extra! Extra! read all about it: Antagonist Apologizes for Appalling Acts!

:iconyouasthenarrator: presents another collection of prompts aimed at inspiring you to explore your characters in greater depth. Try putting them in unusual new situations, have them meet characters from one of your other universes- stretch your imagination and get some fun writing practice at the same time!

Monthly Prompt:

Remorse and an apology
When a character does something that is not of the norm or goes against their values, there is a chance that confusion and regret will soon follow. Guilt can strike at any moment be it before the act or long after. Greed,

Characters are:
Jin "Jay Wells" Shirikawa


Jethro Renge


Supporting Character:
Derek Aames
Supportive Character 4-B DEREK AAMES

DEREK | AAMES■ HUMAN■ PROFESSOR/SKIN FLICK PRODUCER

...Short and Sweet

He was the first person that Jay approached, because for the young man he is the epitome of a real father.  And of course for Derek, he wanted this boy.  He looked so innocent and so beautiful, he wanted to keep him all to himself.  And if by chance he would want to be the boy's first in everything.   Still, he would sincerely wanted to help him.  Above everything else, he do care about Jay.   He may not looked at him as his son but more of a younger lover he would want to groo

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How far will you go for someone you love? For Derek, he thought loving someone obsessively is enough to show Jay how much he means to him. As for Jay, forgiveness is his sacrifice to show his "dad" that it his how he shows him he can repay back all the love he had given him. For Jethro, his love is unconditional, no strings attached for an angel who just earned his wings.


Editing tool: Paper rater

Please be gentle. English is not my native tongue